Open Poetry #37 |
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The-littleman-traveller |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
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Little-man-traveller Rose is her name-- I’d rather call her Petal. Because thy flower spread it’s wings To and fro planting those last memories! I slew a creature made of silk like fantasies-- A Dress you thought you wore how I laughed when thee said ”Doth my tail look big in this”! I saw the perfect-bloomed flower— A droplet of blood mixed into thy complexion compels the awe into the breathing So much like thee too far over the edge! Therefore I hummed to the humming bird such an affordable flight-- She sat in lust over “Vocal love” I’d only gone and hummed the mating song! Underneath the mushroom tops the moon could be no more than flashlights-- Where did I propose to thee? Underneath that dew waterfall the insects hissed their joy! What if the wilderness we roamed Were no more than a garden! I’ve seen the giant’s footsteps-- And heard the booming thundered voice! Perhaps the clouds we look upon-- Were no more than giants cigarette smoke Would explain our large supply of falling tobacco maybe it wasn’t sent by god after all! I hope the stars I’ve looked upon a lifetime-- weren’t anything but what they were meant to be Old fantasies still remind me of the silly times-- we all as kids believed in taller humans. Honey from the tallest of trees-- The ant passage was the best route a signpost outside read “Beware of the Squirrel” we always found the looted rooms. The bumblebee sat its noble guard-- And always caught the sight of us upon the river-rafted-leaf we escaped-- Down the water-roots to the underground burrowed cave. Darkness has a different sense of blind-- Sometimes I thought of the owl that ate my father is but a symbol of the fear I held inside-- And when again dawn came the owl breathed no more. A mighty looking rodent of a rabbit-- awe after the sigh did follow we suppose the nature’d beast be-- nothing more than a vegetarian. Superior in it’s size maybe-- But tamer in the heart doth beat the fairest creature of the land-- Onward toward home we rode it’s back! Daylight sores the eyes like onions bring tears-- We’d found the lost city of the gardens patch! Brave be we to come this far wilt be famous-- Food that fed the kings of old we are now royalty! A husband without a child is wounding on the heart-- But royalty doth surely no work more time to try! Onto the backs of carrots onwards towards Victory-- The sun is bowing its head behind the hills! Good night sweet sun—Good night-- The rustle of feathers in the distance The softest creature known to the sky-- ’Tis the owl back to claim the remainder! So soon to be royalty guess the truth remains-- Death cometh to us all too soon begin the prayer! Soft hollowed flutes of twigs from wood-- I wait the calling of thou vocal wind towards us To Angels I hath seen the sense of madness-- Take the garden patch as thy own and spare me! Saviour—cometh down from the heavens-- Before the owl doth tear away the shadow left behind! A wounded heart—preys on the prey-- I’ve heard the hunter became the hunter’d ’Tis on the taste of death we soar to survive-- In my hands the spear of hope doth raise high! The owl swoops but misses—the feather now mine-- A prize I say—a prize of bravery come down and giveth me rest! The owl swoops again—it’s claw hath scooped a lucky grasp-- My spear upon its heart we rest upon our deathbeds both victorious. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this alot...(; -Juju |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Favorite line... "A Dress you thought you wore how I laughed when thee said ”Doth my tail look big in this”!" The other lines are wonderful too. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I love your fantasy poems, I think you should get some of them published. ~ARh ![]() |
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