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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2006-02-11 02:18 AM

Rain tears poured down her cheek,
peering into the garden where they met,
her breathing became shallow and weak,
for his love, was a love, not to forget.

She knelt down, plucking a red rose,
one they had planted so long ago,
she pulled it up gently to her nose,
loves' frangrance allowed memory to flow.

She pressed the petals against her warm lips,
where memorys' scent still lingers,
sweet scent stained her fingertips,
as the petals crumbled between her fingers.

Deep within her thoughts he remained,
a love devine, flamed, uncontained,
oh, his kisses of passionate lips,
tasted sweet as red berries, stained.

With eyes closed, tiptoeing through his thoughts,
whispering his poems, they danced inside her head,
he her beloved king, she queen, this their camelot,
love is their passion, their symbol a rose red.

Warm fingers were felt across her closed eyes,
warm lips pressed the back of her neck,
love had came back, to her a surprise,
For she was his only true love,
a memory he shall never forget.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2006-02-11 06:47 AM

A great romantic poem here ARH, with soft repectful love glowing through each word..enjoyed reading thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2006-02-11 07:44 AM

Such a beautiful poem ARH, your words affect everyones heart

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-02-11 11:49 PM

Prettily romantic ARH. I admire your style.

troubadour
Junior Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 43
in the land of yore

4 posted 2006-02-12 04:21 AM

The stain of true love is immortal.

I like your style too, ARH, and the poem. Stories and ballads of love and romance form the basis of most of my poems. We will get along fine.

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Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2006-02-12 07:06 AM

Nice writing, thanks for sharing it with us.

Andrew

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

6 posted 2006-02-13 02:04 AM

With eyes closed, tiptoeing through his thoughts,
whispering his poems, they danced inside her head,
he her beloved king, she queen, this their camelot,
love is their passion, their symbol a rose red.

Warm fingers were felt across her closed eyes,
warm lips pressed the back of her neck,
love had came back, to her a surprise,
For she was his only true love,
a memory he shall never forget.

WoW, Beautiful Writing Romantic Heart <3

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

7 posted 2006-02-13 04:20 AM

Oh to be touched by those scented fingertips of yours, great poem, you are Romance

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2006-02-13 05:50 PM

Beautiful...James

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