Open Poetry #37 |
Through the window of dream |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
In deep array of thoughtful bliss Attuned to heart and passions way Amidst the taste of wanted kiss And all the things to hold at bay The wicked thought of happiness An outward smile from loneliness Then mask the face and tell the lie In pantomime of days pretend Hiding from the questions why Rejecting what the wise do lend Feeding where the weeds won’t grow Cursed by what so many know Sleeping by a lovely dream Near true to touch till mind’s awake Blessed from what does hopeless seem A moment free does passion make Reflect upon through hours near Finding what is you my dear In deep array of thoughtful bliss You walk with me in happy smile It may be phantoms that I kiss But even they may last a while You hold my hand and touch my heart Till moment's end and we depart [This message has been edited by Rick (02-10-2006 11:27 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gorgeous writing, Rick. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear iliana, thank you for your lovely comment my friend, very much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"In deep array of thoughtful bliss You walk with me in happy smile It may be phantoms that I kiss But even they may last a while You hold my hand and touch my heart Through moments thought; then drift apart" How beautiful this is Rick! I hope one day she is not just a dream to you. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick A lovely write, enjoyed the read. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Captivating Rick. I really enjoyed. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Nancy, wonderful to see you here my friend and I as well do hope kind lady. Thank you for your reply and time. Seymour, thank you for your words, always much apprecitated. The Lady, thank you for your reply, nice to see you here. Thank you all my friends, may you all stay well and life enjoy. Sincerely Rick |
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