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Beauty to Espier
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Beauty to Espier |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand 
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4833 Beauty to Espier 04 January 2006 Beauty was for love this love of beauty to espier To catch sight of admiration words transcribed upon her heart Reality in fantasy tangible a poets nightmare in her dreams Music of the night her rest awaken Where was destiny tomorrow had yesterday ever been A couple holding hands in the street of love reflected in destination Beauty was verse style could an entity Hearts warmed in coldness love found to seek |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 welcome to pip  this was heartfelt and touch with soul My spirit will rise |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Thank you for your welcome a word of warning - I composed 1000 poems in the last 6 months Only this one above is of a one off and unique style a poet who cares |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
The beauty of love is that it means a different kind of thing to everyone else adding or missing out little details that makes it special |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We look forward as you reveal your poems to us, Sir. Welcome to Passions! |
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om Junior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 31ontario/canada |
hello poet, om here, be seeing you in heaven, that is, unless you come to Canada one day |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beauty was verse style could an entity Hearts warmed in coldness love found to seek this embraces the reader, mysteriously beautiful... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! I much enjoyed your first piece. I do hope you enjoy your stay within these blue halls. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Thank you all for your welcomes and kind comments - even one from who I could regard as an old friend, that really is not so old please feel free to check out the link back to my home page I created my own web site and it might take some getting around in finding the path to my world . I will think about if I make any more contributions here. While the poem in this thread was as much an experiment as anything else It could be said I edited and deleted any flow from the above poem on purpose Also as interpretation is one fact and the reality of thought another. I know more of what is behind my own words, as is the way with all poets Love can come and go, at times I hate myself for the poems I write. Because they all have a real focus and a true love connection of emotions. When for me, being a single man in an empty world is as much a void my poetry can never full a poet who cares |
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om Junior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 31ontario/canada |
interesting comments once more poet, we reside with in a world unavoidable applicable to our own dispicable... may as well enjoy it eh? |
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gypsyheartx Member
since 2006-02-09
Posts 104Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland |
This is really touching and nice. I love the last two lines they really stir some emotion. Really nicely worded -Miranda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
A provocative poem indeed. You are very prolific and your website is interesting! |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
A note about my web site - it is like 3 web sites in one there are two sections - one is my poetry, the other is my web creation side so any one who visits and sees what a beginner can do, in making their first ever web page in May 2004. The first page is but a front door to many and many more to come. As for my works above, so much is the poet, and yes there was a couple holding hands in the street when I composed my works - such is but one truth of several between the lines. A poem written in thoughts of an 'Ontarian Beauty' in Canada, and I live in New Zealand Also currently I have two other works in these threads as a new comer I feel I should mention - the others are entitled 'Shadow of Love' and 'Alison Maria' (Krauss). a poet who cares |
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