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Open Poetry #37

Try It

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2006-01-11 12:17 PM

Try It
19 July 2005

Loving the world
unconditionally
is
a dance
of rounded
ballet grace
of electric Flamenco clicks
of tango passion
of running
in Rimbaud abandon
through fields
of wild, wild flowers.

It’s honey
and cream
slow on the tongue.
It’s pan flute
notes
silver
and savoured.
It’s fingering silk.
It’s stroking
a purring cat.
It’s the healing
deep in the eyes of
adoring dogs and horses.

Loving the world
dissipates stress,
envigorates the soul
and paints the spirit whole.

Try it. It’s easier than you think.

- Owl

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-01-11 01:19 PM

of tango passion
of running
in Rimbaud abandon
through fields
of wild, wild flowers.

yes, its the conditioning of mind, we are such negative souls by nature...but with practice and allowance, we do have these momemts embrace us...

so thoroughly enjoyed this and you

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2006-01-11 11:05 PM

Enjoyed...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-01-11 11:16 PM

So pleasing...

"It’s honey
and cream
slow on the tongue."

Great work.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2006-01-12 02:30 PM

Thanks Lee, James and The Lady. Glad you liked it.

- Owl

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