Open Poetry #37 |
Oceanside Evening |
Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Old Sol drinks of a silver sea, his embers burning low, after a mercurial flight through the blue with beautiful Venus in tow. Resting his laurels on the world's rim, molten Old Sol takes a bow, embracing the Lady in a golden glance as she hovers over his brow. She ascends a heavenly staircase via sugar-spun cirrus lath, each cloud haloed with angel glow to light her amethyst path. At first, ablaze in fiery white, they converge in chariots of flame, draw scarlet swords through the bay's gray silk ...begin their evening games. A celestial mirror suspends all time, bound by the song of the sea. A heron silhouette, still, on one leg shadows eternity. But, Lorelei, maiden of the deep, luring Pan and his flute, undulates on the sandy shore, seduction her endless pursuit. Come dance with me, she softly beckons, her petticoats swirling and gliding. Winking and flirting, they trail white lace, slip gently back into hiding. Then twilight marries the sea and sky, they kiss in a violet veil, blush to the toast of misty dunes, stardust left in their trail. But Old Sol, like a suitor spurned, lowers his chalice of gold, takes his smile and bids them adieu, bequeathing them Neptune's cold. The chariots doff their haloed glow and hoisting lavender masts, in schooner salute to a honey moon, scud over a sea of glass. Venus holds court from her satin throne, her glowing sceptre held high, She adorns her gown one star at a time and sequins the evening sky. ` Klassy Lassy ` October 1999 |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
You write beautiful imagery, thats what makes a poem higher than the standard poem the ability to see things in a different light or way |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Karen! Please, look around, enjoy yourself, and be a part of our circle of friends! Also, check your email for a special greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was beautiful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most beautiful entrance piece! Please enjoy your stay with us. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karen~ You are a breath of fresh poetic air blowing into our ever expanding circle of new poets~ I ENJOYED this ... the all of it~ Particularly liked this thought - 'Venus holds court from her satin throne, her glowing sceptre held high, She adorns her gown one star at a time and sequins the evening sky.' WELCOME !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Lovely rhyming and flow! The imagery was killer. Welcome! "I'm the soul drifter, and I'm out of this town, ain't no use hangin' round, you see" -- Lindsey Buckingham, 'Soul Drifter' |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
KL Very beautiful imagery. I am entranced with your entrance...welcome!! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
The painting I see as I read .... is beautiful. Welcome aboard ~Sheri |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much - Welcome to Passions! *S* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is beautiful writing, Karen. Welcome to PIP. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
n-joyed it klassy..sounds like just down the sreet from christophers..(if it is still called that) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"She ascends a heavenly staircase via sugar-spun cirrus lath" Now that's poetry! Welcome Karen. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Wonderful... I look forward to more. Welcome |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
And I yours, Dominique! thank you. |
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