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The 12:33 |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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The 12:33 Drawn parallel A shivering moment of ecstasy As they pass each other. Andrew  |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
You short words put me there ... I could see, hear, and feel everything about it. In my non-expert opinion ... Excellent! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andrew~  I LIKE IT~And ... Irie ?? OMG ... SO good to see you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
(oops) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Great! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"A shivering moment of ecstasy" ~ My favourite line for obvious reasons!  Linda P.S. Great new photo! |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Excellent!! Thank you Andrew for writting this! |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Short and to the point...very good..paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Straight to the point and full of truthfull emotions, this is real poetry! Very nice. Cheers - Ed Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it". |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for all the kind and considerate replies, they are really appreciated. Andrew |
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