jellybeans
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2005-07-05
02:50 PM
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grief snuck up hauled back and gut punched the day the hours and minutes winced and slowed to barely a crawl
the day countered with a sharp inhale the sky paled and the strength drained from the earth’s greens and browns the clear blue quickly clouded over and then the rains came
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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
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2005-07-05
03:08 PM
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Ah, honey...
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MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
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2005-07-05
04:35 PM
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Aaah...sometimes the rain just evoke in me similar feelings.You have penned it well. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` "Oh...me!Oh Life! Of the questions of
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Marge Tindal
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2005-07-05
04:42 PM
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OhSweetJellyGirl~ I know this rain ... drenched am I also~
*Huglets* love~ ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
Email noles1@totcon.com
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
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2005-07-05
06:39 PM
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yes, it does sneak up just when you think you are away from it
and then the rains come
but the sun always shines again
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Gentle Spirit
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2005-07-06
07:51 AM
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ah JB gal, the rains come, they cleanse and then life is regenerated...
holding your hand wishing I could make it better somehow. Write lady, your soul sure does shine....
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LeeJ
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2005-07-06
08:03 AM
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yeah, sometimes those gut punches bring a body to their knees...wrenching places we try to avoid, right? Hugs to you
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suthern
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2005-07-06
04:49 PM
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If caring could be an umbrella... you'd peek from comfort just long enough to see the rainbows.
Excellent write, my friend.
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Ratleader
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2005-07-19
11:23 PM
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Oh how I do know that gut-punch feeling....wish you didn't.....~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________
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jellybeans
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2005-07-20
02:23 PM
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thank you all......sigh.......had to walk away from poetry, the lack of words is disheartening...to come back and find such care is encouraging...thank you
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serenity blaze
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2005-07-20
07:29 PM
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I have heard it time and time again, and always "they" say, "time" heals.
I think not, m'self.
Days like these come again and again, and the pain of loss is always new, and not a surprise, and yet, it still catches one offguard--like a suckerpunch.
You have the words, j.b.
*hearthugs*
Anyone who doesn't understand should consider themselves temporarily fortunate.
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garysgirl
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Florida, USA
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2005-07-20
07:44 PM
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Hon, I understand these feelings so well. And, like Karen said, sometimes time doesn't heal. With some things we will think we are better about them, then they come right back with that same "gut-punch" and we are right back where we started from.
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Earth Angel
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2005-07-20
11:43 PM
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Dear Beans of Jelly, you have a way of just reaching out and grabbing the solar plexus ~ and the heart ~ of your readers. I feel your words.
You are a wonderfully expressive writer.
Sending you an extra-loving hug, EA
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JesusChristPose
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2005-07-20
11:50 PM
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This put me in a certain... how would I describe it... an earthy, weathery mood. Enjoyed.
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