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Writing Brought Some Relief
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Writing Brought Some Relief |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Writing Brought Some Relief Whilst you broke my heart I can hang on to my pride As I am open and honest There is no reason to hide In finding the inner strength My self esteem will renew Even during this heartache I had always remained true I have to rise over adversity Remove all my self doubt Ones that hide something Uses the cowards way out Knowing I am not to blame I am not the one with guilt Still over the recent weeks Many tears have been spilt Forgetting shall not be easy It became the hardest part Writing brought some relief Only time will heal my heart Hope ©2005 Link with graphic and music below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/92/poem_764943.html |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
High Hopes! I mean, "Hi, Hope!"  It is such a treat to hear music playing in the background while I am reading your poetry! I could almost hear Roy Orbison singing the words to this poem! Love & Light, Linda  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I have to rise over adversity Remove all my self doubt Ones that hide something Uses the cowards way out Darling, I believe it is human nature to questions ones own mistakes upon a disagreement or dissolve of a relationship...self examination is a very good thing, as long as we don't beat our selves up, but more so, take a collective look at what how we might have offended another, and perhaps correct that if possible...yes, yes yes, you are so correct, one doesn't hide things, and to me, if they do, it should be a great big red flag saying, you might want to stay clear? Hugs for your tears |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Linda , yes we write with emotion and Roy Orbison sings with so much emotion Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you Lee there has been no wrong words or goodbye just silence at the other end from someone I always thought was a friend Hope |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Writing brought some relief Only time will heal my heart i hope it does sad songs dont last long untill a brighter day comes along best wishes ~wolfman |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Boy do I know that silence too, and it hurts when no explanation comes with it doesn't it. Nicely written about a sad situation Hope. |
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