»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #36
»
Possibility
| Open Poetry #36 |
|
Possibility |
|
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
|
Possibility I rode a possibility Into a woods humility And there I saw the shadows born The shadows of beginnings dawn They shifted slowly growing tall As I diminished from their fall And backed away the light of day But could not stop nights fade away And in the turn of light and mime I prayed upon a moment’s time To catch the ponder of the awe Before the sun could bright the floor It was a scene within a dream It was a gleam within a stream A fantasy a mine of gold A treasure that I could not hold I could not hold in attitude This fantasy of amplitude |
||
| © Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I rode a possibility Into a woods humility And there I saw the shadows born The shadows of beginnings dawn They shifted slowly growing tall As I diminished from their fall And backed away the light of day But could not stop nights fade away And in the turn of light and mime I prayed upon a moment’s time To catch the ponder of the awe Before the sun could bright the floor ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ YOU ARE SO COOOOOOL!!!!!!!!! you know I LOVE this one.... you make me tree hugging heart giddy... I wish I had the new pics I took just the other day from an early morning hike... then you would see how keen your senses are to mine... this very poem encompasses what I saw and felt in those sunbeamed moments. Once again your "touchless touch" takes my hand.   *ww*  |
||
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loving the write, Sy and JM's reply, complete with awe inspiring photos |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Sy... and I love JM's reply and pictures.  ~Afternoon hugs & tea, Nancy!~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., anything and everything, is possible! Hang on to those dreams in gleam!  Love & Light, EA |
||
|
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I read this poem early this morning, moments after you posted it.....one-and-a-half clock spins later, my reaction is the same -- "Man, this is good stuff!" ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*putting this in me library* filing it under tree hugging gleeeeeeee |
||
|
Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
So many possibilities are wonderful to ride when on a trip of fantasy....great to come home to such gems as this that brighten the day...*big hugs* |
||
|
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy... thank you for the woods... it brought out the moth's talents!    |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"And in the turn of light and mime I prayed upon a moment’s time To catch the ponder of the awe Before the sun could bright the floor" And you did it...of course you did...and I am caught within the ponder of the awe!! |
||
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Unfortunatley I don't "do mornings" so I am sure glad for people like you. A beautiful sight this truly was. |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, What can I say that I already haven't said.   Midnitesun Thank you dear. Nancy, Me too Hugs. Earth Angel I will and thank you. Hugs Ratleader As pleasing a reply as I've ever had. JM, Startime55 Brightening your day is a big reward. Interloper I love you love it. Sunshine You are a love. Martie I have so many loves. Sharon, Not as beautiful as you. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
