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where two dark-winged angels meet
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where two dark-winged angels meet |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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where two dark-winged angels meet in the red of earth two serpent trunks rise then twist in greet of eucalypt lines tell their age and just behind the spread of leaves a messy afro springing here and there peeps the moon she lights the gravel white in serpo creep where two dark-winged angels meet spangled-bound against the gum and there I am arms wrapped round knees to chest my eyes against the sky holding poesy in my hand with you in focus. 230404 - repost and slight-ly edited ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling and you always hold poesy in your hands and it oozes from lips maybe even hips? LOL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I can see this, Maree...your poem is alive!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"maybe even hips" lol.. Midnite? care to explain LOL thanks for poesying, er moseying on in  Hey Martie, thank you my honeysuckle, sorry i missed you, you snuck in as i was replying to Midnite up there  ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"and there I am arms wrapped round knees to chest my eyes against the sky holding poesy in my hand with you in focus." Ahhhh..this is beautiful!!! Much enjoyed Maree!! Hugs YOU! Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 yep...just that and this  'cause you already know. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, you shoot straight from the hip... (never mind, maybe this is one of those dumass colloquial expressions that doesn't translate well) I read everything you write, yanno |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I do believe Martie's right! Your poem IS alive! But then again, each poem you write evokes a familiar image! Enjoyed the artistry in this... misc'e |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Maree?... This... is beautiful... and so are you... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm with Martie on this one -- it lives! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
So? I'll give it a slight bump. It...You, a wonder. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This reminded me of a darkly beautiful tune by System of a Down http://www.systemofadown.com/ Check out the lyrics to "Chop Suey" from the album "Toxicity" . . . you really must hear him sing to see what I mean . . this song . . . it portrays what you have written here, in my mind. This is brilliant, Maree. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you do bring life with your words Maree. Miss you. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Maree...indeed you bring this to life...with words and image.... In your light I learn how to love |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sensuous with a touch of moon evokes the beauty of the dark |
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