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Open Poetry #36

Full moon reminder

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-07-21 08:09 AM

O heavenly moon,
full in face,
how you pierce deeply
into the sleep
of the nightsky,
in remiss of the crown
of your star made tiarra,
you sink hard in the heart,
where he no longer sings,
his once pristine beauty
now a jagged scar
where stars once connected.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-23-2005 08:34 AM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2005-07-21 08:58 AM

when you speak of the moon
I smile

enjoyed this inky

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-07-21 09:11 AM

inkedgoddess
Good metaphors, enjoyed.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-07-21 01:28 PM

enjoyed this moonlit write

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2005-07-21 02:25 PM

Where stars once connected , Awwwww this was so touching

Hope

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2005-07-23 04:49 AM

doing it for me

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2005-07-23 05:01 AM

It truly has been one intense lunar cycle. (You had migraines too?)

It's great to read you again, mish. Don't go waning on me now, either.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2005-07-23 03:44 PM

I thought it was just me . . .

you captured that mood beautifully

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2005-07-23 03:47 PM

This is captivating Michele.
So very much enjoyed this keeper of a read.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-08-09 07:07 PM

I read this before, a couple times
and sighed

awesome piece

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2005-08-09 07:35 PM

she wakes me too, and sometimes it's as sure as pebbles on my bedroom window...

beautiful and apt, mish

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