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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-12-13 07:24 PM

Love twists the oak of my land,
winds lazily through stony brooks,
laughs heartily among the canyon
walls...and brings to bear a lone
wolf of a tear...perilously balanced
upon a wavering lid.

Can you perceive the wrench of my
soul in your absence?  Feel the void
that leads within the cave of my
heart where fires have burned and
withered...

Can you sense the smolder of a
vine that entwines me into your
arms?   The stones that fall upon
my shoulders as your steps lead
further away....

Perhaps one day a light shall
bathe the silhouette of your
loveliness, the rise of silk that
you are....and one day bring to
my parched and pouting lips that
one cry....One cry when it is
gone.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-12-13 07:29 PM

Love twists the oak of my land,
winds lazily through stony brooks,
laughs heartily among the canyon
walls...and brings to bear a lone
wolf of a tear...perilously balanced
upon a wavering lid.

*sigh* Magnus my friend, your writing just keeps getting better and better!!
More please.

hugs, Chris

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-12-13 08:10 PM

Magnus~
*sigh* ... not just misty-eyed here ... sobbing~

I need a *HUG*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2005-12-13 08:25 PM

Awwwww gosh, here Marge,......ONE huge and
lingering hug for ya....

Thank you....

and thank you too Chris....I'll see what
I can cook up for ya!!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-12-13 09:54 PM

Magnus
Your words are like the mellow play of a harp. Delightful to read.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2005-12-13 10:03 PM

quote:
Can you perceive the wrench of my
soul in your absence? Feel the void
that leads within the cave of my
heart where fires have burned and
withered...

yep, and it's gettin warm in here

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-12-13 10:17 PM

Perhaps one day a light ...

~*~

Yes...

perhaps...

just so.

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