Open Poetry #36 |
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Did I |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Did I dream we danced on aires That danced our souls That danced our hearts That danced A little heavier Did I dream that we held ideas in eyes That challenged our souls That sought rhythm in our hearts That glanced A little spark Did I dream you in my arms Dancing with your charms Beating to a feeling Held in substrate As we became one |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
well, didya? ![]() |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
A sit com in England had the opening lines Bloke: Are you dancing Woman: Are you asking Bloke: I'm asking Woman: I'm dancing and all in a scouse accent Maybe the dream was there and again maybe not Bodger |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..perhaps you did. ![]() Lovely...lovely indeed. Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Liked the format of this one Bodger, very nice indeed. ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: and what, please, does that sound like? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed your words... M |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol I was going to ask the same Q that lady Sunshine asked ? scouse ? |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
nice D My spirit will rise |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
The sit-com was called the Liver Birds which comes from the name of a building in Liverpool. It featured two girls sharing an apartment. If you listen to the Beatles in their earlier days you have the scouse accent. I was trying to twist opening around from the words Thanks for your comments Bodger |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love It. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks Froggy Bodger |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've missed your words just an awesome write here |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks I think I said earlier there were reasons but things panned out differently to what I thought and I have stayed with the ID Bodger |
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