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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Yellow Children of the corn swarm, dance around a yellow maypole, nibble plump kernels of youth-truth giggles carry on a southern breeze balmy where winter is upside down Ten little feet do a gig scream in delight-fright as children do sounding sounders smother smaller cries: an ugly boy who got underfoot tomorrow’s stalks grow tall and high. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"youth-truth" ...love that I went through a corn maze last fall and got caught in it for a while... unlike a child I panicked a bit...and probaby will never go into one again  M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is nothing more terrifying than suddenly having the inability to be heard; and that can happen in so many ways... You brought back a terrifying moment for me, that I haven't thought of, in years... and I thank you for that. |
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she'll_be_apples Junior Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 22 |
Fantastic Writing! Terrific imagery  ~peace~ |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I have to admit I became a little worried towards the end of this Vision and how I saw your meaning left me betwix understanding and not so Bodger |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
brilliant writing corinne, i can't believe this was buried, deserves to be read and lauded |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is a nice write, thanks for sharing, keep up the awesome poetry. Poetry can get you very far |
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