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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-07-14 03:08 PM

Waves crash
and emancipate
the longings of the foam,

i watch windowside
fixed on the clouds,
waiting for your face
to reappear,

rain batters its own puddles;

within the same sea,
the beauty of a beating heart,
the sorrow of self entrappment.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-16-2005 12:09 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-07-14 03:14 PM

dang I know the feeling

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2005-07-14 03:32 PM

"rain batters its own puddles;
within the same sea,
the beauty of a beating heart
and the sorrow
of self entrappment"

I have never read something more true.

Outstanding.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2005-07-14 04:12 PM

"rain batters its own puddles;
within the same sea,
the beauty of a beating heart
and the sorrow
of self entrappment."

Sigh........Big Sigh

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-07-14 04:52 PM

"rain batters its own puddles;
within the same sea,
the beauty of a beating heart
and the sorrow
of self entrappment."

WOW!! Excellent write Michele!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

BeWitched
Junior Member

since 2005-07-06

Posts 31

5 posted 2005-07-14 05:28 PM

Excellent, like someone said, nothing truer.
Enjoyed

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2005-07-14 05:36 PM

sIGH, I just LOVE reading you...

a "keeper:

mxx

take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter.

~neruda~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2005-07-14 07:51 PM

Nice to read you again Michelle...

"rain batters its own puddles;
within the same sea,
the beauty of a beating heart
and the sorrow
of self entrappment."

Always love your introspection, and this verse...this was striking.

TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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8 posted 2005-07-15 03:53 AM

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2005-07-15 06:52 AM

easy read

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2005-07-16 08:41 AM

Good Lord, you know
I am so strange because I saw
you as a mermaid chained to that shore.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2005-07-16 08:56 AM

thanks guys.......
suzie, you see very well

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2005-08-21 11:17 AM

just cuz

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2005-08-21 09:54 PM

thanks again for stopping by

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

14 posted 2005-11-23 11:04 AM

ah mishy, perfect, perfect

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