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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-08-03 04:59 PM



You look out your own window
There in the dim lamp light
Is the corner where we waited
For our bus to arrive
On the high picket fence
Local events are announced
On paper that seems spectral
In a veil of blue
And now that we know,
(Except for the last two),
What our numbers are
Isn’t it odd to find ourselves here
With that dog
Whose name we’ve forgotten
Barking at stars  An amber moon
Just rising above the roofs


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1 posted 2005-08-03 05:07 PM


A very well written poem.
I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,
Ethel

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2 posted 2005-08-03 05:14 PM


wow, this is stunning.....

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

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3 posted 2005-08-07 11:09 AM


You absolutely capture these pictures -- and bring out the true colors in them. I like this very much.

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4 posted 2007-04-27 12:20 PM


nice poem for a painting.
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