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Sunday Evening
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Sunday Evening |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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You look out your own window There in the dim lamp light Is the corner where we waited For our bus to arrive On the high picket fence Local events are announced On paper that seems spectral In a veil of blue And now that we know, (Except for the last two), What our numbers are Isn’t it odd to find ourselves here With that dog Whose name we’ve forgotten Barking at stars An amber moon Just rising above the roofs http://www.juliesulzen.com/sundayevening.html |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very well written poem. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs, Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wow, this is stunning.....  In your light I learn how to love |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You absolutely capture these pictures -- and bring out the true colors in them. I like this very much. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
nice poem for a painting. |
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