Open Poetry #36 |
boys and bangersocks |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
they bend the bow of morning and let fly the night there beyond an amber apple on top of no telling's head fast forward to windmill stars they are not giants here from under the fan of my bed but their shadows touch then are the tattoos on my arms and my skin is slippery for long moments when my panting hound is his master chasing the car fat freeways for the bones of other warriors prechewed and glued eternal as decals on the windows of the raider's fans chariots ____________________ dark scribblenote: cowboys are down the road doing spring training...locals are raider suited gangies..and the kids are confused by double role-less models |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and then we ask why? Sheeeesh Well done, my friend your images and use of words, really make me smile...enjoy reading you... looks like we're on the same wave length this morning... Are you peeking...? hehe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well the Ravens are in this vicinity across the line of course in MD but we have the Raphie steroid role model problem now...amazing what makes the news today of importance... M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: And therein is the crux of the poem. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Well written.... Go Cowboys!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the scribble notes are the icing to your poemcakes to be a pencil beneath your fingers and be a note on your eraser head |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
and you have photographed in words the black and white truth of it 'roll' models, indeed |
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