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Open Poetry #36

The Book Of Light

lyricpoet
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since 2005-07-16

Posts 199
NY, USA

0 posted 2005-08-02 05:04 PM

The Book of Light

Splendor shall be hers, for she sails upon the vessel of the sun. Let radiance rise within her from that which her eyes have devoured it. Send forth such light which envelope in the folds of golden rays and stand of divine beauty in every turning of the earth. Between two halves of the sky there the portal of heaven opens to the gateway of paradise. Leading to the light of her heart where the transformation of her mortal soul to an angel may take place before God. She stand before the book weighed in the brilliant and steady rays of the sun, magnified a thousand time in its radiance by the divine. Embodies by love on a thrown drinking from the sweet air and the wind. Forms of youth in beauty embraces her loveliness and defies time and age, bring praises to her spirit, with strong cords and angelic voices singing illustrious lyrics from the book of light.

(C) Kevin Brian Wright

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

1 posted 2005-08-02 09:23 PM

I like this.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

2 posted 2005-08-02 10:45 PM

Lyric,
Your imagery is outstanding,I see the divine.
Were one to nit-pick, there are a few mis-spellings. Nothing serious. Since you have chosen to accentuate content over form ,all I can say is, I liked what I've seen so far.
Doc

lyricpoet
Member

since 2005-07-16

Posts 199
NY, USA

3 posted 2005-08-02 11:21 PM

Thank you for your comments

Greeneyes