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Van Gogh's Nature
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Van Gogh's Nature |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I see with Van Gogh’s inner eye Riotous colors, minds imply Flooding o’er the palettes girth This palette of this stream and earth The color blinds the introspect They also bind the intellect They fuse the mist into a dream A seem within a flowing stream They must be taken as a whole A simmering soup within a bowl The chaos that they truly are The chaos from a living star This fusion is a point of light That fills the sky within the night The light that made Van Gogh so odd That tried to touch the hand of God Yet I would touch the hand of God And that’s why people think me odd |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling, and thanking you for this |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy a pirouette upon the stage a dance of words upon the page I see the art of you and he and much enjoy the mastery  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
another definition for odd could be artistically insane? *wink* me thinks youre just poetically brilliant.  I'll touch your hand... you can put in a good word for me with God. *S* one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Not only did I enjoy this masterful art you have defined so well, but also, Janet Marie's reply... your perception I'm certain has definately touched the old man's hand...and look, see, He's smiling a great big old nod on you and all who are blessed to read you... Hugs you and thank you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a man took me to see god once then had a smoke ,tipped his hat and said 'see ya sweetheart" i still feel him between the starry nights and the sunflowerss his crytic colors etched deep inside the eye of the heart |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
They just think I'm crazy lol. It's good to read you, sir. This is a lovely, write... Take care, sir! Always, Alyssa Hupomeno. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., I will always lend an ear when you speak!   Love & Light, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Odd? No... Wonderful... absolutely wonderful... that's what I think you are. *S* This is beautiful, my friend... your words and JM's creek pics blend perfectly! *S* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
WOW! I read the poem and thought wow that sure looks like Janet Marie's steam - DOH! Well even old ladies have blonde moments you know  Beautiful both picture and words, and I love when she and I twiddle our toes in her stream too. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun It's my plesure. Martie You are adorable, hugs JM, I have no words to thank you.    LeeJ, A delight to read your reply. Hugs inkedgoddess, Cest la vive Hugs GG, Thank you for the lovely. Earth Angel, Love you too, hugs. suthern, You are the sweetest, hugs. Sharon, You'll never know how much I enjoyed your WOW. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Is it only my eye that [maybe] sees? The need of hands in need of seed? I see two figures in reach of more... like poems, and stories, and one's core... I sense a poet who dreams a muse I see a man who stands, infused, I reflect a man who stands a shore, and whispers, reflective, evermore There casts a light for only one, who seeks a stream beneath a sun she is fellow, thus she bears a seem allowing one light, to field a dream... Is it only my eye that [maybe] sees? The faces and grasp of those in need? ~*~ Ah, between the two of you? It begats inspire. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I see it too, sissie!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you Kari... very very cool  one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy, Not at all odd from my view-point, for, I would do the same. Nice thoughts and write. Doc |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine It certainly does. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, I'm sure of that. JM, Can't thank you enough. Doc, Thank you my friend. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sy, Very, very nicely perceived and expressed! Your poem describes Van Gogh's Nature so well! My favorite so far! This is definitely a keeper! Thanks so much! miscellanea |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Love this and all the wonderful replies. Seymour, proof that you I N S P I R E. SG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
miscellanea My very humble thanks. SimplyGold A very sweet reply, thank you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Seymour, I love your words, as always, and I love the pictures, too. You are great, my friend. thank you. Hugs,  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Thank you sweet. |
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water_stained_wisdom Junior Member
since 2008-03-07
Posts 28 |
This fusion is a point of light That fills the sky within the night The light that made Van Gogh so odd That tried to touch the hand of God Yet I would touch the hand of God And that’s why people think me odd ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~  these remnants of a voice and smile, |
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