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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-08-17 04:25 AM


Candytuft dances with
breeze, rippling across
the downs gently.
Sitting upon chalk
hills, powder blue
butterflies, dizzying playfights
closeby me, smiling
i think of
you, your smile.
simply plain i
am, will always
be, but love
never leaves me,
gently beating, breathing.
Oh a love
gracefully bourne in
a heart moved
by sheer loving
delight in all
it's forms, to
impart words of
devotion, of kindness,
is a joy,
such a joy.
Unencumbered by ill
motives, only honour.
Sit on i
shall, glowing to
the far corners
of the compass.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-08-17 09:58 AM


GoldenRose~
This is plain downright purtimous !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-08-17 10:03 AM


simply plain i
am, will always
be, but love
never leaves me,
gently beating, breathing.
never ~~~simply plain~~~ Phil

love this
M

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-08-17 10:25 AM


this is I believe what everyone seaches for himself/herself, instead of from within to grant it right back out...

well done!

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Gaia
4 posted 2005-08-17 01:21 PM


lovely imagery
and giggling here at Marge's new word
~purtimous~

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-08-17 06:34 PM


Phil, you are far from plain, m'friend
far, far from it

enjoyed the imagery of this piece of you

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-08-17 06:36 PM


Yanno, I really love this Phil...

would you mind if I keep it?

Enjoyed the tenderness this shows.

Startime55
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7 posted 2005-08-17 06:55 PM


Stunningly beautiful words that glow on in the heart after the read...*big hugs*

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2005-08-18 01:34 AM


I listened closely, and I could hear the music you speak of, we must have been tuning in on the same radio station~

funny, a poem came to me(last night) before reading yours,(I was getting ready to post it) and it is along the same lines as yours~

~ARh

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

iliana
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9 posted 2005-08-18 01:41 AM


So uplifting!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
10 posted 2008-05-05 07:24 PM


Going back and reading your words,
you are missed!
this is all I have to be near you...

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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