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Jigsaw Heart
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Jigsaw Heart |
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Yogi Member
since 2001-11-05
Posts 68 |
You Know When Love Is Over When Your Heart Is Shattered Pieces Scattered All Over ThePlace Lost Pieces, Knowing if You Can't Find You'll Never Be Whole Again I Found A Few Odd Pieces Lying Here And There, But Not Enough To Feel Whole I Just Rambled Around Lost In A Place Where I Did Not Want To Be A Darkness Where Love Is Forbidden Then Out Of The Blue Came Feelings, A weird Tingly Sensation My Heart Was Being Put Back Together Jigsaw Pieces Being Put Into Place Wondering Who's Doing This And Why I Could Feel Each Piece Clicking Into Place A Picture Of My Heart Was Reforming Then The Final Night Came I Felt The Final Piece Slip Into Place Then Came The Words Hi You Then I New I Was Complete |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Now that's from the heart! Great write! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
I really enjoyed the story-telling, which no doubtly came straight from the heart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching write |
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