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Open Poetry #36

Childhood

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-07-30 11:20 AM

Consciousness
Without comment

Sunset—
Above a parking lot
The colored sky

http://www.juliesulzen.com/parking.html

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2005-07-30 12:06 PM

you really have a unique way of saying things.....I like your style....

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-07-30 12:17 PM

Perfect! I love the way you do these with the pic link.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-07-30 04:08 PM

...
and do you see the Z
of some childhood
memories...
the brilliant of
a sunrise sky,
forming
majestically...

before the I?

~*~

One of the most wonderful matters
that surround Passions In Poetry...
is when one is inspired
by another...

as you were...

and as you did.

Thank you.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2005-08-07 12:05 PM

You're a gift to this place....and I'm thankful for it.

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______________Ratleader______________

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2005-08-09 12:53 PM

I love this... and I agree. *S* You are a gift to us. *S*

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