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Thanka |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Even that In dusk light Is somehow beautiful— Late July— Beside the road A dead raccoon |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
this is nice - that you can see beauty in a dead raccoon. Beginning the stanza with a puzzling "even that" highlighted the next one. BTW, you titled this Thanka - is this a form of poetry? are there any rules for this. I am intrigued, maybe I could learn to write one?? |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Even in the most sickening of life's abnormalities...there is beauty. Congratulations on being able to see all of life's profoundnesses (not a word...but you get the idea)! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent!! Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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