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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said you wore that jacket because I undress you with my eyes but you laughed then and flashed me wide just long enough for me to see the apron and a faerie's tan I touched your mouth there where the smile edges are with my mind only but you felt it and made it into that shape that says you like to dance but just can't right now because the music is too fast you turned your back on me then and stood on tip toes to find us a slow song and a place for your jacket you said my hands were warm when you touch them sometimes with your mind prime and other places I would just have to imagine ____________________ dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-26-2005 10:12 AM).] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
the beat of ones heart does race when a need a physical need an emotional need is tempted by comfort, be it by good or evil, yet the dance is too fast, for one who is not in need of filling a void, a hunger or thirst with pleasures that only a body remembers, and the mind tries to forget. as usually a scar from pain that was incountered as lies of lust and love only gave way to sin.leaving one lonely and volnerable to evil and placing ones life with sin, instead of love a free spirit a forgiving soul a loving heart to become as one never allowng real love a life and omeone to dream and grow old with and keep family values, faith and gods word alive and care for the land and all he created , instead of pain and sorrow and greed and control sorry for rambling major changes in life happening My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms groves..thanks for the read.. and theory of life.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Two poems, for the price of one reading... gotta love it... don't you enjoy it when you make minds reel?  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I think he enjoys it, when he makes minds feel....  this is awesome D |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine..thanks lady friend for the eyes and smiles _________ ms suesea, thank you lady for the touch songs |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
love imagining your imagines... |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Love how your imagination is always working overtime... save me a dance, will ya? Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks lady friend.. __________________ ms indi, rincon would be nice in your eyes, something about the waves and ample time..thanks babe [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-28-2005 07:19 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i love your achy breaky heart when it leaks all over my own cryin one come here......and let me hug you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky...I got my hug shirt on..thaks lady |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was amazingly beautiful, raw emotions all dressed up in elegance....wow DS, what music you stum on that golden flute of yours |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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