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False Reality |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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In this boredome you settle down whine and wail it wont always go your way lost and uncontrollable every ounce of blanketed pride you drown beneath the sea a chaos of memories left of the middle no where to go settling into reality cry out loud scream and shout lost in a daydream chasing a false destiny im lost in my journey i took the wrong turn who do i wanna be just me who do i do when i want to be anything but me |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I can totally relate. Its sorta hard sometimes critiquing the actual poetry because of the message. Especially with phrases like "wrong turn." Can so relate. God bless. Nice write. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
amazing read, this soft thought provoking spread of theme.... |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
a chaos of hide came to my mind at one point I really like to read the undercurrent as I think you are just showing the rough sea Bodger |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"left of the middle no where to go settling into reality cry out loud scream and shout lost in a daydream chasing a false destiny" "...im lost in my journey i took the wrong turn" Many poets have taken this road...The one Frost took, that was "less traveled by" enjoyed -----------ice ><> |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kellie  "im lost in my journey i took the wrong turn" I think that many of us have made this very same wrong turn. Hugs to you sweet gal. I refuse to make plans past this moment in time.... |
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