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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-07-27 09:50 AM

Allowing the air
to sweep over,
its touch gentle
finger waves of splendor
guarding me from
the heat of thoughts
that seed and grow within

Fear
holding me back
melting into my flesh
sighing these lips
wasting the minutes
as one step forward
two back
seems to be the order
of the day

If it could all end
on a simple note
treat me
to a feast of happiness
rest me in a silent breeze
seal me in contentment
then I could be
the me I am

and show you...
love

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-07-27 10:11 AM

ya know, this reminds me of those ultra happy times, which I didn't carry with me on reserve for when times were not so happy....hugs and thank you for a lovely write/reminder

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2005-07-27 12:20 PM

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-07-27 12:59 PM

"If it could all end
on a simple note
treat me
to a feast of happiness
rest me in a silent breeze
seal me in contentment
then I could be
the me I am

and show you...
love"

Excellent excellent write Maureen.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

4 posted 2005-07-27 05:33 PM

Words to remember

Bodger

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

5 posted 2005-07-27 08:10 PM

Oh wow...that was indeed a powerful statement. Sounds like something I wish I could say to someone I care very much for...who doesn't even notice! Beautiful write!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-07-28 12:02 PM

Nice writing...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2005-07-28 07:31 PM

yanno what I think M? I think that the
"me" that you are is pretty damned special...
hope all is well with you. Hows the sub-ing going?

I refuse to make plans past this moment in time....

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2005-07-28 07:32 PM

talk about a saveable write!

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