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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perfection Why does she stay with me if she questions my love. I wasn't aware that love was not making a mistake. Wouldn't the proper name selection for that be perfection. JamesLee July26 2005 |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I wasn't aware that love was not making a mistake. or never saying you're sorry- and that is truly perfection, for it means she accepts the faults along with the rest of you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well said and written James. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
perfection in the individual waiting to be complemented by someone who understands patient love my friend, patient love hugs to you |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Alright then!!! I felt that one! That was profound...my man! Brilliant! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent James! Extra hugs for this one!  Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
JmesMichael, On target! Rhetorical Question: Why do we seek perfection in others when it is not possible from ourselves? Nice poem, a keeper for me because it is something to be reminded of. SG |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very well said James |
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