Open Poetry #36 |
Always |
Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Always a vision of home even when home isn’t known or a vision Always a thought of might be in the dark of a cold windy night that is Always a thought that you could stay and conquer fears and deliver What isn’t wanted Always a thought it could have been and you had the power and strength To make it so In a vision In a thought In fear In deliverance In power In strength On a dark cold windy night |
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Caraway Junior Member
since 2005-07-14
Posts 24 |
Welld done Bodger! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this alot. It seems like passage from a book. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
No it's not from a book. It from the inside of people and that is the way my thought is going at the moment. Decisions people make that are from the insides and everyone has the right to decide whether to stay or go and I wasn't thinking about personal relationships but external relationships that are internal relationships to the person. Bit long winded on the explanation but that was my meaning. Bodger |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If, I may, I believe what Juju meant, was it reads as a passage of thought, something that we might read in a book on helping one get through the rough moments. No, indeed, Bodger, this is yours, all yours...as I know first-hand that you would never print anything except with the possible matter of it being "from your own book" of life. Well done, Sir! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, always a thought! SG Enjoyed. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks Sorry I over-reacted Bodger |
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