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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2005-07-25 02:43 PM



My Only Need

you are
my only need
as morning light peeks
through the trees
and kisses the earth
and the air is
so thick with you
even stars envy
the here and now
and here is
the sweetest time
when I am
closest to you

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-25 04:54 PM


And you are breath of fresh air....



Contentment looks good on you, Mrs.

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2 posted 2005-07-25 05:22 PM


**sigh** very nice..
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3 posted 2005-07-25 05:33 PM


wow! very romantic...beautiful.
Juju
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4 posted 2005-07-25 05:37 PM


Beautiful

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Bodger
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5 posted 2005-07-25 06:44 PM


I needed a shower after this.

Lovely words.

Bodger

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6 posted 2005-07-25 11:14 PM


*smile*
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7 posted 2005-07-26 09:20 AM


You write romance so beautifully... and happiness looks so good on you! *S* Yes!
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8 posted 2005-07-26 09:27 AM


and a beautiful heart it is

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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9 posted 2005-07-26 09:50 AM


Delightful!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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10 posted 2005-07-26 11:41 AM


good write
Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2005-11-25 01:26 PM


Just the kind of thing this day needs.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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12 posted 2005-11-25 01:42 PM


absolutely beautiful red..
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13 posted 2005-11-25 01:44 PM


It is great to see such a contentment in your writing Beautifully done Helen.
vandana
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14 posted 2005-11-25 05:38 PM


good read
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15 posted 2005-11-25 06:07 PM


Awwww, how romantic.
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16 posted 2005-11-26 10:06 AM


.....sigh....I smile every time I see you this way....

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JesusChristPose
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17 posted 2005-11-27 08:28 PM


Sweetly written. Enjoyed.
iliana
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18 posted 2005-11-27 11:04 PM


Hi, Helen.  I sure did like this one!  *hugs*....jo
JamesMichael
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19 posted 2005-11-27 11:50 PM


Like this...James
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20 posted 2005-11-28 10:32 AM


GR8 write and lucky guy!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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