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Open Poetry #36

The boxer

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2005-07-24 12:32 PM

I measure you
     uppercut
from the tip of your nose
   to the edge of your lips
        where I can finally live
                 uppercut
Introduce us to your kind
     throw the towel
             wash your face
              blood soaked now we look alike
                      uppercut
           we are panting
a dance where no one leads
          an unforgettable painting
                     uppercut
           you were my entrance
             from a safe distance
            like minded individuals
    brought together by your terrible uppercut

The Mongrel cat came home, Holding half a head proceeded to show it off to all his new found friends

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-07-24 05:14 PM

while I may not understand boxing,
this is a fine write

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-08-21 11:29 AM

well done

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