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Of Pin and Sin
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Of Pin and Sin |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Pin and Sin I sit upon a mythic pin As sharp a pin as any sin And feel the pain within my brain Seining like a thing insane It spreads a net about my see A let that clouds humanity It plays within an open wound That places me an Isle marooned Yet still I search the clouds on high A dreamers wile, a thought, a sigh To make a breakfast for a king So I can be a bird and sing And thought I watch conformity I cannot stop my vanity Nor can I stop the pins annoy No matter how I self employ This protest of this utters sigh Perhaps it’s best I let it fly |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we hurt ourselves through many choices we make, but through self examination, we grow and let it go, moving forward, like a top...never ending.... Oh you do relay a great race...and I love reading your wisdom...thank you |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Yet still I search the clouds on high A dreamers wile, a thought, a sigh" I loved this part.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sometimes it's best to just let it go Sy. Loved this one. Have a relaxing enjoyable weekend. Hugs & Smiles, Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Nodding...I do know this. I have to agree with Nancy, sometimes you just got to let it go. Excellent writing, just as I remembered it to be. Patricia |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I sit upon a mythic pin As sharp a pin as any sin And feel the pain within my brain Seining like a thing insane It spreads a net about my see A let that clouds humanity It plays within an open wound That places me an Isle marooned ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And thought I watch conformity I cannot stop my vanity Nor can I stop the pins annoy No matter how I self employ This protest of this utters sigh Perhaps it’s best I let it fly ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yeppers...Randy say let fly... says to just knock it on!!  and I dunno about no mythic pin of sin... but I know you got a rock and roll pen of rhyme...and this one is da bomb. Nor can I stop the pins annoy yer so kewl. *L* *ww*    |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, yep...let'er fly high, Sy |
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