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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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How good it is To fall in Spring— A white blossom Upon the sea |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lovely imagery very Oriental in its method of offering a simple truth |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I wonder how this would look, translated into Fall.... How good it is Tumbling in Autumn-- One tattered leaf Finds the sea Yours is better, but a fun exercise anyway! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Again, I say, you are the master at this.  |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
A quick image of a peaceful moment comes to my mind thanks Tom |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
A white blossom(or white clouds) fall upon sea or ( sea of something) in the spring. wonder how people read this one in 2600. white blossom could be flowers, clouds, girl with a wedding dress, or you would not mean to see a sea-plane landing or soemthing like that,such as space capsule down. ha. |
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