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evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
She haunts my dreams like a ghost in the night Wandering in and out of my sight Venturing close, I smell her scent She’s gone in a flash, I can’t repent I search for her but it’s all in vain Her vision in my mind is all that remains She’s everywhere and nowhere, I’m going insane I pause a moment, my senses to regain My every thought is filled with her All the passion within me stirred To a raging boil that overflows This beating heart that cannot hold A love so desperate, so intense That all other loves make no sense Some errant words passed from my lips Words that she could not forget That pierced her heart like a sharpened shaft That brought about her thunderous wrath And left me here in destitution Without a hope of restitution To live my life in sorrow and regret To wring my hands and sit and fret Wishing with all the pieces of my heart To take back the words that tore us apart. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You had me from start to finnish, so powerful, filled with passionate love, intense...I like it! has my name written all over it LOL! ~ARH  "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
evomx5 Good write enjoyed the read. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"A love so desperate, so intense That all other loves make no sense Some errant words passed from my lips Words that she could not forget That pierced her heart like a sharpened shaft That brought about her thunderous wrath And left me here in destitution Without a hope of restitution To live my life in sorrow and regret To wring my hands and sit and fret Wishing with all the pieces of my heart To take back the words that tore us apart. " you weave it tight mister... I loved this! total keeper..  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You may be a Junior Member, but there is nothing "Junior" about this write! Beautifully written and kept my rapt attention!  Ah, if only we could take our words back at times... Love & Light, EA |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
ummm...this is haunting! i can agree with it on so many levels even tho i'm a girl it can be said for someone I love too. so great. *add - River How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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