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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-07-21 05:20 AM

Draw the line,
from point A to B,
from one to three,
all the way to Z,

Use your skill,
steady and straight,
keep going past eight,
have a strong will,

A mystery awaits,
what will it be?
the moon and stars?
keep going to see,

You have taken each step,
from one to now,
the numbers are connected,
take a bow,

Your reward awaits,
for many have never,
left one or start,

to get to see,
the full picture,
of my heart....

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-07-21 05:39 AM

Crypticly interesting write here...enjoyed..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

lyricpoet
Member

since 2005-07-16

Posts 199
NY, USA

2 posted 2005-07-21 06:56 AM

Much enjoyed, thanks for sharing!!! ~ LP

evomx5
Member

since 2005-07-11

Posts 52
Atlanta, GA

3 posted 2005-07-21 07:19 AM

Yes...to know the full measure of a person, one must connect the dots to see the picture..and in your case, it is a beautiful picture, indeed.

I like the form of this and the message contained within.

Excellent...Mike :-)

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2005-07-21 07:24 AM

Wonderfully expressed , I loved how this was explained

Hope

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-07-21 07:44 AM

LP~Sooooo glad you stopped in and ENJOYED~

From one romantic to another~

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-07-21 07:45 AM

Mike~

You are making my day with your lovely compliments!
thanks again for reading my heart~

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2005-07-21 07:47 AM

Hope~

Thanks, you are a kind, sweet woman~

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2005-07-21 10:17 AM

The connected dots are sure to paint a pretty picture of your heart!

EA

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-07-21 10:42 AM

what beautiful dots you have

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2005-07-21 12:55 PM

beautiful RH not many get to see the real heart....lovely words...

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2005-10-25 10:12 PM

Love this....though for me it is rather the opposite......

                   Dots

I can’t
                                           stop
           thinking that if                 I
                                       could
just     connect       the
                              dots
it                 might               simplify
get direct
          come down
                      to a message
  as unambiguous as thrown china
but               I’m           in             it
already        the          pattern   drawn
and           infinitely     complex
all                 the         lines
               shadings
                obvious:

       I have to find the dots.

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