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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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0 posted 2005-07-20 08:04 PM

Approaching...

Echoed steps carry past their
weighted fall.

My body leans to fully meet this
sound.

Until a pause.

As if an edge to tempt me near
some silent void.

Then once more the echoes
fall.

And I lean further still to
your approach.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (07-20-2005 08:52 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-07-20 08:36 PM

Ericc
anticipation is a strong feeling.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-07-20 11:46 PM

I adore your poetry! I read this one with breath abated!

Linda

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-07-21 12:43 PM

goodness you do write wonderfully!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-07-21 01:24 AM

Enjoyed...James

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-07-21 03:53 AM

One could guess, your touch is as gentle as your writing~

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-07-21 10:17 PM

Beautiful..very much enjoyed Eric.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2005-07-22 02:13 PM

Absolutely lovely.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

8 posted 2005-07-22 05:41 PM

loved this one, makes me want to listen to the next footfall more closely

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2005-08-20 09:50 AM

Echoes of love
resound on the Path
leading to Heaven,
vibrations tumble
across space
and play the song
of eternal longing
within our hearts
...
we listen and
we move on
as One.

Thank you dear Eric once again, for your beauty and inspiring poetic tunes.

I love you.
Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2005-08-20 02:42 PM

Now THIS is poetry!

some could take a lesson or two from you Eric

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2005-08-20 04:03 PM

Taking note!

Carpe' Diem

Live Like You Were Dying ~ Tim McGraw

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