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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-07-19 08:30 PM

Together we walk
hand in hand
down at the ocean
listening to
the voice of the sea.

It churns in time
this roaring tide
as we walk along
side by side
gentle waves roll in
touching bare feet,
under bright sun sky
we glow in it’s heat.

Night soon returns
with the gentle sounds
that were born
within the sea,
creating a song
for us to dance
and there is no place
that I'd rather be

than locked in your arms,
wrapped in your love
listening to the softly
whispering sounds
of the sea.

Revised, 7-19-05

Give me your heart
Make it real
Or else forget about it...Santana

© Copyright 2005 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved

* shining star*
Member

since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

1 posted 2005-07-19 09:10 PM

i really like this poem

-Smile, it's not a sin.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-07-19 09:43 PM

Very lovely Donna...
Much enjoyed the read...*watch those hands*.
Love ya lady~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2005-07-19 11:54 PM

This is very pretty. It reminded me of watching the sunrise over the beach last month. Truly a treat.

miscellanea

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2005-07-20 12:08 PM

hugsss you, you brought many a memory back with this...thank you

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2005-07-20 09:14 AM

Very nice Donna.

All these water poems today makes me long for the beach.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-07-20 09:31 AM

NOW THIS WAS RIGHT UP MY OCEAN!!!

Smiles and hugs...extremely beautiful

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2005-07-20 10:27 AM

Oh Yes indeed...I love the feel and sound of this wonderful poem...a wonderful vision designed for romance....*big hugs*

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