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Trouble with dreams
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Trouble with dreams |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Foreign to the touch Stars out of focus Blank canvas behind eyelids frequency painting a lucid dream where soul meets body cleansing the static of demands this is where I get off and transfer trains and hold her this is where she uncries my tears where I get high on faint fumes this is where all connections find me blank canvas perception illusion heart an open door to secrets to the past to love and her I'm no longer scared defenses and reality no longer present senses bombarded when she finds me in my dreams... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
wow beautifully written i really liked this one , can i have it ..lol just kidding, i am posting old dream writings, i try and write them down when i wake and if i remember anything later in the day i ll write it down , last nights was wild , but thats for a later date ... excellent writing ~wolfie |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Very nice... very nice indeed... Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Interesting and very well done! Love, Margherita |
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