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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
Today I promise.... To listen.... More carefully.... To set my heart free.... I give it wings!!!!! Roots I'll always have.... Tied only to my children.... To take those vows... Never again.... I'll never look back on the past.... I'll Look to the future..... Never taking for granite.... What hold near.... One more promise to myself.... this may take awhile, I cant write it or say it, So.....may be I'll finish when the time is right, But for now I'll never let anyone keep me down!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When one makes a promise to one's self... to hold it true... is the hardest mountain we give ourselves to climb. Well done, in both heart, and context.  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
wonderfully expressed poem, keep your promise to yourself and yes...never let anyone keep you down. Well penned~ ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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