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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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In the beginning before turbulent heavens separated couples he fell for you In the final stretch she couldn't take his breathe away In the beginning she wanted fun times shorten the wait from work to pleasure shaken torsos at raves in the last mix she needed someone to take her dance away... in the end beginnings left couples recovered from disco dances ego provoked pranks recuperated pleasures became work turntables slowed he kept his breathe she wanted someone else... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
in the end beginnings left couples recovered from disco dances ego provoked pranks recuperated pleasures became work turntables slowed he kept his breathe she wanted someone else... well written poem ,i like the way it reads happy new year ~J |
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