Open Poetry #36 |
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Final Words (WV Miners) |
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LoveBug![]()
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Based on a farewell note found on the body of Martin Toler Jr. Trapped with my brothers we do what we’re told but it’s been hours... And I know I know I don’t have time left on my side I grab what I can It wasn’t bad I want them to know my last thoughts were of them and that my crossing was not one of pain of anguish it was peaceful and there is nothing to fear I just went to sleep I do weep but only for those left I try not to judge though I know I’ve been done wrong we should be out by now it should have never happened in the first place But now.. I think of them my loved ones for thoughts of revenge of pain do nothing now my last thoughts are of them of our love of a life I lived and what I leave behind I see them on the other side I see it, it’s not far now.. I love you Music pours over the sense |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
![]() wondering how their loved one's will get through this. ~hugs~ ![]() Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my, I just finished watching a special on this tragedy on Primetime Live. So very, very sad. Such hard working, family loving people. Bless their brave hearts - each and every one of them. Very well written piece. hugs, Chris |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
Lifting them up in prayer As their loved one's would want So that they may be close Instead of distant and distraught A sad time, indeed. You wrote beautifully in regards to this tragedy. jm |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am so deeply affected by your poem and his words and the travesty of it all, that I can scarcely key my response ~ so I will now pray for the departed and for the loved ones they left behind... Love & Everlasting Light, Linda |
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Thank you for all of your comments.. Music pours over the sense |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
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This is very beautiful... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have written a very touching, sad but beautiful poem, dear lovebug! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
![]() Heart Hugs. In the midst of winter, |
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