Open Poetry #36 |
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Mia adorata |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity ![]() |
![]() * * * Mia adorata * * * Your voice weaves sunbeams around my heart clearing away all trace of gloom long forgotten tunes spiral through my mind like eagles high up in the sky unburied like gold treasures from under decades of dust the sounds of love resonate within my pounding breast I grasp the subtle essence of you opening all my energy channels Mia adorata... Like fine paint brushes dipped in gold your words colour my world the solace of secrets unveiled makes me ride waves of pleasure into freedom’s wide expansion. I breathe deeply wrapping myself into the warmth of this moment stretching across time and space. In awe we pause. Nothing more needs to be said. Tongues rest while we savour the fading echoes of love’s talk. Mia adorata… * * * Love, Margherita |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Like fine paint brushes dipped in gold your words colour my world What a beautiful picture you paint for us with your words. Causing us to stop and admire. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so very soft and beautiful.. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ The pure love that shines forth from this penning is so YOU ... I believe that had I read this anywhere on the Internet ... that I would have recognized the heart from which it came~ 'Like fine paint brushes dipped in gold your words colour my world' Indeed, dear lady ... you dip into a gold-gilded inking well~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))>< Email - [email protected] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And the person on the receiving end must be sighing loudly by now.... ![]() |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful expression given to the beautiful emotion of love from one with a beautiful heart! I'm in a "even love lost is beautiful" mood today so have a beautiful day! ![]() Helen |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Mia adorata…" Ever notice that some words look and sound as beautiful as their meaning? Wonderful... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So much is spoken in those moments that are made just to be. Wonderful verse. TD |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
reading you is like panning for gold there's a garnet in every sentence |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all so much my poet friends for your generous loving comments. Sometimes two words are enough to flood us with the gratifying awareness that we are loved. ... and the echoes resonate for a long time. Love and Joy. Margherita ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita, you, my dear, color the world with your words of love and adoration. Simply loverly! Hugs with love, Linda |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
"Like fine paint brushes dipped in gold your words colour my world" Okay so this has already been quoted, yet I still felt the need to say it is BRILLIANT. yes. the whole write is, but especially this stanza. Very lovely. xxx farewell the ash-tray girl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Still silk...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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