Open Poetry #36 |
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Swallowed by the Night |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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![]() Artist: Avi Yershalmi Swallowed by the Night ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ Naked I stand on a slick, icy slope, In midst of this century’s storm. Dense falling snow is blinding my eyes, And I’ve naught, to keep my bones warm. The night swallows up my stillborn screams, in this wild and desolate land. While ravenous wolves are gathering ‘round me, As they thirst for the blood Of a Man. I tremble and shake with my primal fears, as their yowling echoes thru’ vale. I faint from the sound, of gnashing long teeth, ~ Then wake to my harrowing wail! “Oft times it is the deaf who truly see and the blind who truly hear.” ~ Linda L. Dowd [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (01-05-2006 03:31 PM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, so very Wow, Earth Angel, to your poem and the picture. - Owl |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Great write, Linda! "The night swallows up? my stillborn screams," My night must have a very large collection. I wonder what it does with them. Put them on a shelf, polish them up, and then return to sender so that the cycle repeats? But I think your night is a gentle and loving one! ![]() Helen |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Linda, such a sobering dream, and how you capture the feel! I tend to think that the "wolves are at the door" so to speak, and we must keep our spirits light. Hope you can get some rest -- and that your dreams are more peaceful, dear friend. ![]() |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful, I really enjoyed it as I do reading all of your work, I hope you have a lovely new year and post lots of new pieces for me to enjoy Julie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
These are poetic heights, my dear friend Linda! And you convey very powerfully the primal fears that haunt men. Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I know you can scare them der' wolves away what with your long flowing gown and magic wand. ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome write Linda..held me captive it did. Hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i believe your unwaivering faith can send them off trembling if need be ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel When they see my inner dragon they all leave quitely. LOL You are a first rate writer. ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Owl ~ I'm always wowed by a "Wow"! ~ thank you! Warm hug, EA |
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Bunches of Honey ~ Howdy, Helen! I hope you don't have many more stillborn screams for the night to swallow! Sleep sweet, Dear One! ![]() Loving hug, Linda ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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iliana ~ Fortunately I seldom experiece such terrors of the night ~ but when I do... ![]() Sleep well this night, my friend! Beddy-bye hugs, Linda |
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whiskey ~ Hi, there Julie! It's good to see you! ~ and thank you for the kind words! I'll do my best! ![]() Warm, welcome-back hugs, Linda |
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Margherita ~ A series of calamities lead up to the night from hell where I near froze to death but was too tired to get up and close the window! ![]() Loves 'n huggums, Linda |
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Sue, yer a hoot 'n a 1/2 ![]() ~ Well, I do have a wand but I had forgotten it on cloud 9! ![]() Warm hugs 'n smiles, Linda |
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Nightshade ~ Better to be held captive by my poem than a pack of ravenous, blood-thirsty wolves! lol Thanks for dropping by, Chris! ![]() Loving hug, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Goddess ~ I must admit, I have more spunk in me at times than I ever realized ~ but a pack of hungry wolves would definitely be pushing me to my limit! lol Big hug, Linda |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Wonderful read,great picture to complete it. :-) |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
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I have to agree with everyone else...this is a wonderful piece. Loved it! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Great graphics Linda....Now, I know that wasn't you standing there in your birthday suit....NO WAY!! Loved the poem, well done.. |
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Martie
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Wolves are wonderful creatures...I think you should feel pleased that you feel them around you...they may be protecting you. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetEarthyOne~ I'm buying into MartieSis's line of thinking here ... yes, the wolf symbolizes The Protector~ Love this AND YOU~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Earth Angel~ love the your poems as always and your picture is is just lovely, thanks for sharing this piece, have a blessed day ![]() Poetry can get you very far |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
This write reminds me of a series of books about the Ice Age... excellent, is this piece. what a disjointed sentence. oh. well. always, xxx farewell the ash-tray girl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Hi, froggy friend! Yes, that certainly is an amazing painting. I am mesmerized by those wolves! Sending you a warm hug, Linda |
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EV2 ~ Kevin!!! It is so good to hear from you! I hope you have been well and that 2006 will be a fabulous year for you! Thanks you for the nice reply! Warm, welcome back hug, Linda |
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Barry ~ You make me laugh, Bare One! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Martie ~ Thank you! I do believe that you may be right. ![]() Hugs with love, Linda |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
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Posts 772uk |
You've still got that style that i find works with the images and the visions of my mind nice write |
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Margie Girl ~ ...and I know that you would know of such things. ![]() I appreciate your kind words, One of Spirit Light. May 2006 be one of healing, health and happiness for you, Delaney, Landry and the rest of your loved ones! Hugs with love, EO |
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Angelhearted One ~ Hi, Laura! Thank you for saying that! Words like that are always nice to hear ~ and read! ![]() It is good to know that my poetry is appreciated! Loving hug, EA |
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p.w.c. ~ Hi, there! Pleased to make your acquaintance! Welcome to pipTalk! ~ and your "disjointed" sentence was beautiful! lol Thank you! ![]() Warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Hi, Phil! It is really good to hear from you! Your reply just added to my smile! Thank you! I have always appreciated your appreciation of my poetry! ![]() May 2006 be filled with joyful moments! ![]() Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a fantastic write, Linda. And, I love the picture. |
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Sunshine
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Talk about making a nightmare come to life. Well done, Linda! All the way around! Chilling! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
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wonderful write Linda. Much enjoyed sweetie. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A haunting write this is Linda!! I am so pleased I didn't miss this one. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Powerful images and thoughts in this poem. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Smartest Chick ~ Why thank you, Sweet Sue! Have a great day! ~ and year! ![]() Loveya! Linda ![]() |
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Sunshine ~ Yes, indeed! 'Twas a chilling nightmare! Brrrr! I can still feel it in my bones! Thanks for dropping by and warming me with your Sun Light! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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Gentle Spirit ~ Thanx, D! Sending you a hug and a half, Linda |
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Enchanting One ~ I too, am pleased that you didn't "miss this one"! ![]() It is always good to hear from you, Nice Nancy! Loving hug, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
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scorpio ~ Hiya! Powerful emotions can fuel powerful images in a poem! lol Good to hear from you! Warm hug and blessings for a wonderful 2006! EA |
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