Open Poetry #36 |
Today |
Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Today I wake to nothing new A jest I think, to think I grew I sleep at night, to wake to change and wake each day to feel no change Today I thought of nothing new to change the way I walk it through and still I'll go to sleep tonight and pray for ways to make it right Today will bring things nothing new routine sets in, we wake on cue a pill, a drink, maybe a few will fix things now, but won't fix you Today I wish I lived today and loved the things I had today thought nothing more than what I have it's more than you could ever give |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! a fine write nice rhyming too! Happy New Year's to you, Jason. (especially in the month's of JulyAugustSeptemberOctoberNovember.) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jason, this is a good poem. I like the way you rhymed it, too. Hugs, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason, this is awesome, I love this form. Nice and tight and the message? *nodding* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Jason...enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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