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Heartburn |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Heartburn By: Noah Eaton 1/3/06 . . . . . "How is it I should love her?", speaking in my dizzy soliloquy, collecting my sheer curiosity, one hand clutched to the bedknob, the other running through my hair, envisioning bathing in this quiddity. With mental lipstick I paint a face, break out of all physical carapace, and you glisten like morning dew, sancrosanct, and I'm at war with the barometer, trying to keep your first impression from evaporating, it seems each struggle leaves me commisserating... . . Stay just a little longer, I want more than just your distorted silhouettes, skinny-dipping in my head, Everything's different for a moment, but in the end, it all feels the same. . . Stay just a little longer, I don't want this meeting adjourned, I swear you're the dimples of the smooth lip fern, the proof I've been burning for you all along, pouts within my deepest heartburn... . . . . . Reading your eyes, is like solving a Sudoku puzzle, in Braille edition, you were my smooth translator, with your lips like caramel in my ears, satiating my deepest malnutritions, before you, I cross my heart, hoping to live and revisit your earliest years, that we inspire in our selfless embrace, oh, when you're not here, it's a velvet equivalent of torture, missing you, re-summoning you... . . Stay just a little longer, I want more than just your distorted silhouettes, skinny-dipping in my head, Everything's different for a moment, but in the end, it all feels the same. . . Stay just a little longer, I don't want this meeting adjourned, I swear you're the dimples of the smooth lip fern, the proof I've been burning for you all along, pouts within my deepest heartburn... . . Oh, can you imagine soon you and me, will be what everyone wants to be, you effortlessly read my lips, so be it and so it is, I want to be this with you, when will we be, besides our deepest honeysuckle dreams, when will we be... . . . Oh, can you imagine soon you and me, will be what everyone wants to be, you effortlessly read my lips, so be it and so it is, I want to be this with you, when will we be, besides our deepest honeysuckle dreams, when will we be? . . . . . "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A very passionately needing write Noah. Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow Noah...this is indeed very passionate! Hope that dream girl comes along real soon for you. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, this is so romantic!! Very good wsriting!! Hugs, Ethel |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
enjoyed this very much...loads of passion and deeply sensual. BRAVO!! ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
:saqueeze: Noah, she is there, just let fate determine when you meet. Anything else just wouldn't be what should be.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
as always...awesome! loved this... Stay just a little longer, I want more than just your distorted silhouettes, skinny-dipping in my head, Everything's different for a moment, but in the end, it all feels the same. yes, in the end,,,,,it all feels the same... Vytorin anyone?  |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
sigh.... what a lovesong...  Neeraja |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful! Simply beautiful! Don't know whether to cry or sigh so I'm doing both. Helen |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A young man's dream love couldn't be described in a more beautiful way, dear Noah. Your heart is ready, filled with tunes of love, releasing them in the right moment to the right girl. Meanwhile your readers eavesdrop at your heart's door and find beauty and pleasure. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, may your honeysuckle dreams become your reality! Sweet dreams!   EA |
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