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Fire |
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ska babe Member
since 2005-11-08
Posts 58nowwhere, IN |
Fire is like life It starts small and gets bigger Bigger and bigger it grows But if you just let it go It starts to fade Slowly it dies But if you look close You can see in the coal The bright shining light just like the flame use to have Don’t give up the fire still there Just give it wood and watch it grow And just remember that every one has a fire inside of them They just have to keep it alive "I am the one who has to die when it's my time to die, so I'm gonna live life the way I wanna"- Jimi Hendrix |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
This is nice. It kind of resembles a camp fire in appearance - was that intentional? You express a point here many should head, including myself. Thank you! |
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ska babe Member
since 2005-11-08
Posts 58nowwhere, IN |
its nice to know that you like the way i write and with the whole fire thing its like a camp fire or well really any kind of big fire "I am the one who has to die when it's my time to die, so I'm gonna live life the way I wanna"- Jimi Hendrix |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i hear ya on this , fires can be rekindled with just a little love to the coals ... cool poem ska ~ J |
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kitvb1 Junior Member
since 2006-01-23
Posts 28Trebgast, Germany |
Once again, I find your poetry superb... it always seems to be what I've lived through (or should i say, survived). Thank you Kit We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths. |
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