»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #36
»
Pine Island
| Open Poetry #36 |
|
Pine Island |
|
|
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
|
White snow falls Along the shore An abandoned way station By the sea Faintly Upon a ruined wall I came . . . I waited . . . For so many years . . . I was here . . . Yet where were you . . . |
||
| © Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved | |||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ Oh man ... this one just grabbed me and wouldn't let go of my heart~ Thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
||
|
Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Good write |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
there is a picture I saw not long ago this fits it perfectly |
||
|
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
So poignant, John. I wish she could have been there for you. Perhaps she was . . . in spirit . . . Perhaps she was waiting for you somewhere else and wishing you were there. - Owl |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love the scene you conveyed and the implicit melancholy. Love, Margherita |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such an ache to this John. Well done! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
