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inspiration: Edward Grim
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inspiration: Edward Grim |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Dim craft curls in on itself birthing shadows and the glint of spiral dance in witnessing playing sparkle tags of air passing rainbow flags of this: "Tag! You're it, you're it!" I laughed and almost ran through the cracked wall where I saw the glimpse of kids through the lack of plaster that was jagged like the wrath of Thor-- and yellow aged layerings almost seemed to be a smile beckoning the welcoming to come and play a little while - a million miles a way. * * * From Edward's poem,The Rays of Sunshine, found here: /pip/Forum93/HTML/004505.html |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
serenity blaze, I couldn't have said it better myself! Wonderful, you have my praise. - Ed Grim |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm very glad that you like it, but please know if you feel like it's an impingement on your work in any way, I would understand if you'd like me to remove it. and yes, you did say it better yourself.  I just admired it much m'friend.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow, I loved both writes! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A wonderful inspire Ser! Excellent. In the midst of winter, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
now this reminded me of the looking glass, don't ask me why . . . and thank you for directing me to a most gifted writer, Karen. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It's such a pleasure to see the inspiration that comes from another inspiration! jojo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen.....You did good!!!! Real Good!!!  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
At first I read: inspiration: ed grimley(sorry edward, thats what i saw) i'm in another world, speaking of which, k's writing is otherworldy, yes.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Always a great write from you m'lady..and Edward Grim's too. Enjoyed both Mxx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Powerful poetry from you both! Love, Margherita |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'd like to thank you all, but especially Ed, for being so gracious, as well as inspiring. |
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