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Open Poetry #36

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Courage2Survive
Junior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 32

0 posted 2005-12-29 06:06 AM

They say one place in Italy,
   wasn't built in a day.
But give me 20 years,
   and I am unable to break ground.
Lost,
   spinning in violent circles.
Circles of torment,
   and of pain.

Loss,
tears,
Love

Blame

They say good things will come,
    to those who wait.
What am I waiting for?
Uncontained,
  where do I go from here?
   The sun ducks behind the horizon,
leaving me breathless.

Time,
  ends,
someday!

Lost, and ready to roam.

<3 Heart 2 Heart <3
«*:·. God Bless
         .·:* Love and
         *:·.  Happiness,
            *«        Kellie Cantrell

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

1 posted 2005-12-29 12:07 PM

"They say one place in Italy,
wasn't built in a day.
But give me 20 years,
and I am unable to break ground."

I love this metaphor. Thank you for sharing.

~Ben

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2006-01-03 07:38 AM

You roam well NOW!

The title attracted me ... and what I found pleased me.

The power lies in what IS.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2006-01-03 03:17 PM

Ditto Margherita...

Enjoyed

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

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