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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-07-03 11:53 AM



Hardly
Cheerleader material
Beheaded as to hair

And yet somehow
In the study hall
It was she
That ruled the hour

And were we then
Not young paladins
Who discovered colors
For their wars

So she at least
Might find an Earth
Worthy of her smile

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Waterfall27
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since 2005-06-24
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1 posted 2005-07-03 12:20 PM


Well done!

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-07-04 06:52 AM


love how this ended
Juju
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3 posted 2005-07-05 12:20 PM


I liked this alot.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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4 posted 2005-07-05 12:43 PM


He and She I often think smile at times

Bodger

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5 posted 2005-07-19 11:21 PM


And her smile lives on in you, I see....and thanks to your superb exposition, I see.

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Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-27 12:38 PM


very beautiful one.

"So she at least
Might find an Earth
Worthy of her smile"

so touching.

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