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Open Poetry #36

Grace

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-07-03 11:53 AM

Hardly
Cheerleader material
Beheaded as to hair

And yet somehow
In the study hall
It was she
That ruled the hour

And were we then
Not young paladins
Who discovered colors
For their wars

So she at least
Might find an Earth
Worthy of her smile

Waterfall27
Member

since 2005-06-24

Posts 98
Ontario , Canada

1 posted 2005-07-03 12:20 PM

Well done!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-07-04 06:52 AM

love how this ended

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-07-05 12:20 PM

I liked this alot.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

4 posted 2005-07-05 12:43 PM

He and She I often think smile at times

Bodger

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2005-07-19 11:21 PM

And her smile lives on in you, I see....and thanks to your superb exposition, I see.

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-04-27 12:38 PM

very beautiful one.

"So she at least
Might find an Earth
Worthy of her smile"

so touching.

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